Regret, A poem.

[Patrick]

Not bad at all very short but straight to the point, Good Job.

[Chef]

The last 2 stanzas were the best.

This was a nice poem too.

[Behind Enemy Lines]

Sounds like from a song, eminemlike. Good job eitherway.

[DeathxXxAwaits]

This is a four stanza poem that I just wrote in the last twenty minutes. It reflects my personal life and just about everyone else's too. (It is generic.) Perhaps it is cheesy, I don't know. I think a lot of poems are about the same things: love and regret. But whatever, here it is:

Regret

I wish things happened differently
I wish that things could change
I wish I could go back
And avert this whole estrange.

Life keeps moving forward
Despite my will to stop
Will I ever get her back?
My instincts tell me not.

Why did this all begin?
Why did I do those things?
My questions have no answers,
And yet the truth still stings.

All I have is hope
And the knowledge from before
With both of those to garner
I will not anguish anymore.

Let me know what you think!

Really good man! I used to 'write poetry' but at the time I was a sad emo kid, so mine weren't that good at all .