Regret, A poem.

[Annuit Coeptis]

This is a four stanza poem that I just wrote in the last twenty minutes. It reflects my personal life and just about everyone else's too. (It is generic.) Perhaps it is cheesy, I don't know. I think a lot of poems are about the same things: love and regret. But whatever, here it is:

Regret

I wish things happened differently
I wish that things could change
I wish I could go back
And avert this whole estrange.

Life keeps moving forward
Despite my will to stop
Will I ever get her back?
My instincts tell me not.

Why did this all begin?
Why did I do those things?
My questions have no answers,
And yet the truth still stings.

All I have is hope
And the knowledge from before
With both of those to garner
I will not anguish anymore.

Let me know what you think!

[BlackChaos]

As generic poems go, I wouldn't place your work of literature into that category.
Definitely a great poem and well placed into proper stanzas. Also, very good grammar.
I hope to see more of your work soon.

[Dotty]

Very nice. Most of us could probably relate, or at least I could.

[Mayhem]

It was a good poem bro. Keep up the good work. It would be nice to have some poems around here. Can't wait for the next one.

[Napalm™]

Interesting poem.

[Drift]

Very Nice Poem i like it

[Mr. Beaux]

Very nice poem, the rhyming fit together and the grammar was more than adequate.

[Inventor]

Rather good, I would love to see and read more from you!


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[Deceive]

Wow, that really was good :'(
Nice poem.

[Sin.]

Finally a poem I can relate to, nice poem!