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Regret, A poem. - Annuit Coeptis - 07-13-2011
This is a four stanza poem that I just wrote in the last twenty minutes. It reflects my personal life and just about everyone else's too. (It is generic.) Perhaps it is cheesy, I don't know. I think a lot of poems are about the same things: love and regret. But whatever, here it is:
Regret
I wish things happened differently
I wish that things could change
I wish I could go back
And avert this whole estrange.
Life keeps moving forward
Despite my will to stop
Will I ever get her back?
My instincts tell me not.
Why did this all begin?
Why did I do those things?
My questions have no answers,
And yet the truth still stings.
All I have is hope
And the knowledge from before
With both of those to garner
I will not anguish anymore.
I wish things happened differently
I wish that things could change
I wish I could go back
And avert this whole estrange.
Life keeps moving forward
Despite my will to stop
Will I ever get her back?
My instincts tell me not.
Why did this all begin?
Why did I do those things?
My questions have no answers,
And yet the truth still stings.
All I have is hope
And the knowledge from before
With both of those to garner
I will not anguish anymore.
Let me know what you think!
RE: Regret, A poem. - BlackChaos - 07-14-2011
As generic poems go, I wouldn't place your work of literature into that category.
Definitely a great poem and well placed into proper stanzas. Also, very good grammar.
I hope to see more of your work soon.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Dotty - 07-14-2011
Very nice. Most of us could probably relate, or at least I could.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Mayhem - 07-15-2011
It was a good poem bro. Keep up the good work. It would be nice to have some poems around here. Can't wait for the next one.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Napalm™ - 07-15-2011
Interesting poem.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Drift - 07-15-2011
Very Nice Poem i like it
RE: Regret, A poem. - Mr. Beaux - 07-15-2011
Very nice poem, the rhyming fit together and the grammar was more than adequate.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Inventor - 07-16-2011
Rather good, I would love to see and read more from you!
Inventor1
RE: Regret, A poem. - Deceive - 07-16-2011
Wow, that really was good :'(
Nice poem.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Sin. - 07-16-2011
Finally a poem I can relate to, nice poem!