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01-23-2011, 02:02 PM (This post was last modified: 01-24-2011, 03:00 PM by Wormag.)
As the legion closes in, loops of darkness surround the edge of hope.
The fountain's still running, but it's reflection is becoming numb.
The plain skies become neglected with hate.

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01-24-2011, 02:17 PM
One minor mistake. "surrounder". Besides that I would say this is alright Smile
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02-11-2011, 12:57 PM
(01-23-2011, 02:02 PM)Rookie. Wrote: As the legion closes in, loops of darkness surround the edge of hope.
The fountain's still running, but it's reflection is becoming numb.
The plain skies become neglected with hate.
I don't really understand what this is supposed to mean, any clues to what you were thinking about while writing?
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