Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl.

[CHEESEWIZKILLA76]

Wow, this was actually really sweet.
You should save this and use it sometime.

[Rive.]

That sounds more of a rap, that is very nice though, that sounds like a very good song.

[prime]

That's a really nice poem !
Good and comforting

[Mayhem]

Nice job dude. Small yet well rhymed. It's good, do you still do poetry?

[Jacko]

That's a really nice poem bro, you should make more.

[нardstyle]

Haha bro what did she think about it?

[Vexna]

Very lovely... I like

[Classicz]

That's lovely.

what was her reaction?

[Vexna]

So lovely!

[Athostle]

Very deep indeed. I read the first line and I was prepared for something sad, but then I saw the second line and it shocked me. This is very emotional, good job.