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Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - 90k - 07-27-2011
Tell me what you think.
Quote:Why Should I Try?
When You're Beautiful in my Eye...
So I ask myself, Why?
why should I Try..
Looking at the mirror, staring at a wall.
While I just lay here and watch myself fall.
These Dreams and Thoughts will never come true.
Because every single one of them involve me and you.
Now I sit here with a Broken Heart,
while slowly my mind starts to Tear Apart..
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - BlackChaos - 07-27-2011
Simple, yet moving. How long did it take you to make this back then?
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - Barneyyz™ - 07-27-2011
This is lovely, a very touching piece. Well done!
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - ๖ۣۜDunsparth - 07-27-2011
This reminded me of my first week of 6th grade back in the day.
I remember it clearly tho there was a girl named Abigale and she was in the classroom across from me my 5th period
so i would get in trouble just to go sit in the hallway and be able to see her she was an 8th grader.
I am now graduated from school and am going to end up going to college soon but long story short.
I pretty much wrote everyday in my journal about my feelings i had for this girl ( she was obviously creeped out )
But i was young and stupid and thought it would be cute so i gave her the journal to read..
and she pretty much read the first half and threw it away then never talked to me after that.
Oh well
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - Swagg N - 07-27-2011
Didn't copy right it! stealing this! lol jk
but nice poem
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - +mK - 07-27-2011
I don't understand how you can write a poem - seriously. Like...maybe you need to write it about something that actually means something to you. :\
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - Analyze™ - 07-27-2011
Nice, very deep. Do you still write them?
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - Rofl Loves You - 07-28-2011
Go and sing/read it to her!
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - Wanted - 07-30-2011
You got talent !
RE: Poem I made when I was in 9th grade for some girl. - Mark Zuckerberg - 07-31-2011
This is really nice.
If I were her I'd have a tear running down my face.