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Kevin's Story - Chapter #1
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I agree with both the responses. It was just something I wrote when I was really bored awhile ago. I will certainly take these things into consideration when I begin to write another fictional piece. Fiction is quite new to me, as I haven't written anything of this nature since I was in the 5th grade or so. Thanks for the constructive feedback!
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Kevin's Story - Chapter #1 - by Virtual Reality - 10-17-2010, 09:56 AM
RE: Kevin's Story - Chapter #1 - by Sam - 10-21-2010, 03:40 PM
RE: Kevin's Story - Chapter #1 - by Hershey - 10-21-2010, 03:53 PM
RE: Kevin's Story - Chapter #1 - by Virtual Reality - 10-29-2010, 08:15 PM

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