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I Still Hope
#1
This emptiness,
Is it really that bad?
Is it because of what is left?
A hole where you used to be.

I can try to replace you,
But who is big enough to fit that gap?
Not a god, not another,
But maybe a dream.

That's it... a dream!
A dream of what we had,
A dream of what I have,
But what do I have?

A dream of you.
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#2
Kind of depressing. This person must mean a lot to you.

Great job, nonetheless.
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#3
I insist that you write a hopeful poem next.
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#4
hmm, well it seems to me that this poem is kind of depressing. Though it has a nice ending to link everything all up.
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