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I Still Hope - Daniel Faraday - 02-10-2011
This emptiness,
Is it really that bad?
Is it because of what is left?
A hole where you used to be.
I can try to replace you,
But who is big enough to fit that gap?
Not a god, not another,
But maybe a dream.
That's it... a dream!
A dream of what we had,
A dream of what I have,
But what do I have?
A dream of you.
RE: I Still Hope - Deltron - 02-10-2011
Kind of depressing. This person must mean a lot to you.
Great job, nonetheless.
RE: I Still Hope - Eve - 02-10-2011
I insist that you write a hopeful poem next.
RE: I Still Hope - Triny511 - 02-11-2011
hmm, well it seems to me that this poem is kind of depressing. Though it has a nice ending to link everything all up.