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Yin's Poetry - about SupportForums
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The big boss lurks throughout
With a beard on his chin no doubt.
The place he created
For all things assistance.

The gentle hand
Of the aides
Guides the way
For both tomorrow and today.

Discussions from visuals
To the fine art of writing
We have it all;
It helps us to remain standing tall.

We take each step at a time;
There's not a limit on how far we can climb.
So take my hand
And help others understand
That we will continue to expand.

Hopefully you like it. Took me a while.
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#2
Cool poetry Smile

I see the relation to SF, hence the title I guess Smile
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#3
Appreciate it. The big boss with the beard is Omni obviously.
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#4
Yeah, thought so,
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#5
The first two lines make me smile and laugh Big Grin Really nice poetry Yin, thanks for brightening my day a little with this.

~ Sam
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#6
Glad that you like it Sam!
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#7
(08-05-2010, 08:59 PM)Yin Wrote: We take each step at a time;
There's not a limit on how far we can climb.
So take my hand
And help others understand
That we will continue to expand.

I liked this part.

Very good poem.
Someone with no history is nothing but suspicious.
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#8
(08-06-2010, 03:28 AM)Ameise Wrote: I liked this part.

Very good poem.

I think I killed it on that part.
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#9
Nice poem, well written man. I'd give it a 8/10 for sure.
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#10
(08-05-2010, 08:59 PM)Yin Wrote: The big boss lurks throughout
With a beard on his chin no doubt.

It is not really a beard..
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