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Nature
The meadow is green
The sky is blue.
This is nature
Mother Nature created this ingenuity.
Inert water
Makes no noise on the beach.
She made it for us to worship;
The beautiful chromaticity.
The phenomenon we know as nature
Is fancied by many.
Worship or despise,
It'll be here always.
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04-07-2010, 08:24 PM
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That was beautiful Yin. Thanks for sharing this. Do you write poetry often?
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Yeah, pretty often. I'll write one for you if you give me a topic.
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Very simple, however concise. 6/10. ^_^
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Wow. It's beautiful. Though it doesn't conform to classical poetry. The measure and rhyming pattern is different. Pretty much like neo poetry.
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It took me like 3 minutes to make, so pretty good.
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Once again an amazing poem, You are a modern day genius man.
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Again with this awsomeness!
Thanks for another fantastic share to the Creative Writing section Yin!
I wish I can find some of my old poetry now. Where did I put it?
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08-02-2010, 11:28 PM
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Yin is very creative in writing. He writes a poem about nature. I salute you for giving time and importance to our nature.
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