Burning Desire

[Colonel]

BURNING DESIRE FROM DREAMFLY ALBUM

For every sleepless night,
For every hour spent,
For each silent moment of memory,
Now I finally decided to,
burning my desire.

A desire that keeps walking me,
A desire for getting my soul,
A desire for getting my life,
Now i finally decided to
burning my desire.

Forgets the shadow of past,
Nothing to got my trust,
When you left me in a rain,
When you left me with a pain.

Don't say a word,
Coz I'll go back on the thing I believe
But I'm afraid you will forget about me.

Now I'm afraid to getting my soul,
afraid to getting my desire
Nothing to got my trust,
Nothing to got any hope,
Coz I finally decided to
burning my desire.

Hope you like my second lyrics wriiten by me.

[Colonel]

Come on give me a feedback for improving my skill guys.

[iNviZ]

I find this nice mate i really do.Do you rite alot of poems?

[Colonel]

yeah i wrote a lot of poem and want to be a writer.Can u tell me where should i improve??

[Psychotic Overlord]

I really like that poem and the way you have said things about one's burning desire.

[Colonel]

I really like that poem and the way you have said things about one's burning desire.

Thanks for it.

[rootkit]

Is this a song or just a poem?
If it's a song are you going to record it?
It's cool!

[Nympho]

It sounds very good. Very valuable poem.

[Colonel]

Is this a song or just a poem?
If it's a song are you going to record it?
It's cool!

It's is a song.Hope in future i will record my own songs.

[Calx]

It doesn't flow. I take it english is not your first language?