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Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-07-2011
BURNING DESIRE FROM DREAMFLY ALBUM
For every sleepless night,
For every hour spent,
For each silent moment of memory,
Now I finally decided to,
burning my desire.
A desire that keeps walking me,
A desire for getting my soul,
A desire for getting my life,
Now i finally decided to
burning my desire.
Forgets the shadow of past,
Nothing to got my trust,
When you left me in a rain,
When you left me with a pain.
Don't say a word,
Coz I'll go back on the thing I believe
But I'm afraid you will forget about me.
Now I'm afraid to getting my soul,
afraid to getting my desire
Nothing to got my trust,
Nothing to got any hope,
Coz I finally decided to
burning my desire.
Hope you like my second lyrics wriiten by me.
RE: Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-10-2011
Come on give me a feedback for improving my skill guys.
RE: Burning Desire - iNviZ - 04-10-2011
I find this nice mate i really do.Do you rite alot of poems?
RE: Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-10-2011
yeah i wrote a lot of poem and want to be a writer.Can u tell me where should i improve??
RE: Burning Desire - Psychotic Overlord - 04-11-2011
I really like that poem and the way you have said things about one's burning desire.
RE: Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-11-2011
(04-11-2011, 01:01 PM)Psychotic Overlord Wrote: I really like that poem and the way you have said things about one's burning desire.
Thanks for it.
RE: Burning Desire - rootkit - 04-15-2011
Is this a song or just a poem?
If it's a song are you going to record it?
It's cool!
RE: Burning Desire - Nympho - 04-15-2011
It sounds very good. Very valuable poem.
RE: Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-17-2011
(04-15-2011, 04:32 AM)rootkit Wrote: Is this a song or just a poem?It's is a song.Hope in future i will record my own songs.
If it's a song are you going to record it?
It's cool!
RE: Burning Desire - Calx - 04-17-2011
It doesn't flow. I take it english is not your first language?