Something I wrote for my parents

[Snookerbro]

Wow...written well and very deep....


I would never write anything like this to my rents.

Cheers

[Dεlluzion]

Nice rhymes, but it's too deep

[Omarito]

It's sorta weird but not bad as a start.

[RussaX]

that is bored ,make more creative

[Melted oreo]

I saw that poem on hf a long time ago.

[Spafic]

I saw that poem on hf a long time ago.

Maybe because I posted it there too?
http://www.hackforums.net/showthread.php?tid=1052519

[DaBaws]

They have probably done so much effort into raising you. I would never talk to my parents that way, no matter what they did to me.

Although it is a good writing, I suggest you work your problems out as it sounds pretty serious.

That's a pretty rough thing to state.
What if you were born to be sold, or abused ?

OP: I like it, it's deep.
You're obviously a good writer.

[iMario]

Can I steal some sentence of it? :p

[Impuhlsive]

Pretty cool... why did you write this?
The first stanza basically reflects everyone's parents.

[Joey Tribbiani]

I personally loved it.

It pretty much expresses my feelings at the moment.

And for those who are saying that they would never say such a thing to their parents - well, you guys are lucky, but everyone isn't.

Not all parents are good.

BTW - Parents' thoughts should not be hammered into the child and the child should not be physically blackmailed to follow orders. This is the case of many children in the world. Most of them, who are "considered" to be higher class people.