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Something I wrote for my parents - Spafic - 02-11-2011
Quote:Title: I am nothing to you.
I am your son,
I am your slave.
I do what you say;
I must obey.
I pretend to listen while you scream,
While I burn inside as you destroy my dream.
I might run off, we will never know.
But if I do, to hell I shall go.
Or maybe it's freedom?
Freedom from the hate,
the fighting,
the stress.
Freedom from the hell you put me through.
I don't love you, you're not even my friend.
You may think you are, but it's just pretend.
As I write this, I keep saying to myself,
"Why, oh why haven't I killed myself?"
/discuss
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Iris - 02-11-2011
Are you emo?
Pretty nice. Its like you're mirroring yourself.
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Gadget - 02-11-2011
Oh wow, that's deep. You going through some tough times?
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Modestep - 02-12-2011
It's good written, why do you hate your parents?
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Triny511 - 02-12-2011
hmmm, i didn't like the kill myself part. But i did like it overall.
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - AsSaSs@iN - 02-13-2011
That's a cruel thing to say to your parents. I mean there are other indirect ways to say you hate them.
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Deltron - 02-13-2011
They have probably done so much effort into raising you. I would never talk to my parents that way, no matter what they did to me.
Although it is a good writing, I suggest you work your problems out as it sounds pretty serious.
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Denirulz - 02-14-2011
Don't talk to parents like that,seriously.The computer you're writing from was bought by your parents right?
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Dear God - 02-14-2011
You should love and respect your parents, no matter what.
Well written btw.
RE: Something I wrote for my parents - Vish - 02-20-2011
I appreciate that you written this for your parents. Did you tell 'em about it?