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[Rate] Twicks.utopia [CnC]
#11
(11-11-2010, 06:51 AM)C4Vendetta Wrote: Colours don't go. Composition is bad.

The colors definitely go. I think what your seeing is the effect of her using Burn on some areas which offsets the original colors she had that do match the color theme Smile

and I dont know what you mean about composition, everything seems in place to me.

But also, yes I would suggest darkening some areas to make some of the details come out a bit, if you still have the layers individual, and un-flattened, then you might be able to do this to add some depth on the "string beads" or lines with the dots lol.
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#12
Something about this looks really odd.
I think it's the background which lets it down, it looks transparent sort of.
Maybe if you used a bolder colour for the background it would look much better.
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#13
(11-13-2010, 04:14 AM)Untouch Wrote: Something about this looks really odd.
I think it's the background which lets it down, it looks transparent sort of.
Maybe if you used a bolder colour for the background it would look much better.

If it's just the grey you're seeing then thats the way she meant it to be though. It is a png though so maybe the color she was using wasn't full opacity.
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#14
I love this sig. Great light colour, and a nice render. I will give it 8.9/10
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#15
Nice text placement, ok flow and light. Not really liking the colour though.
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#16
(11-13-2010, 01:02 PM)Infinity Wrote: If it's just the grey you're seeing then thats the way she meant it to be though. It is a png though so maybe the color she was using wasn't full opacity.

It's at full opacity. I guess the colors are similar to this site's background? idk.
(11-13-2010, 01:46 PM)Navineous Wrote: Nice text placement, ok flow and light. Not really liking the colour though.

Yeah, I think I could have done better on the colors as well.
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#17
Seems fine mate. I'll rate 8/10 Smile
I personally don't like the font color.
That's really weird,Ninja
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#18
Compared to your other tag, this one has a lot of improvement. I really like the colours as they are fresh. Really nice render blending too. There is one thing destroying the flow, is the C4D shape that you can faintly see on the left hand side of the tag, it really is anchoring the tags potential. I'd make the border white which can be fixed easily. Finally the text is actually really good, nice colouring and it's not too distracting. Great job on this piece.
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#19
Thanks for your honesty and positive words Big Grin
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#20
2/10 i hate the anime.
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