Kuma

[gavgav3]

CnC Please

[Eve]

Nice depth, lighting, proportioning and border. The render can be moved slightly left to address the empty space there.

Effects are careful, but a little monochrome without colour highlights or text.

[Magiic™]

The effects are too few for me, but you did well with pretty much everything else.

[gavgav3]

V2

[Untouch]

@ v1 There was much too much space, the lighting was a bit overwhelming and the render looks a bit low quality.
If you used the same render everyone else did it should of been high quality.
You wayyy overblurred and messed it up.

@ v2 bad text and positioning. Render is now better quality and you fixed the blur.
You have improved the lighting nicely although the signature porportion now looks weird.

[Richie]

Nice one, you used the ninja bear tutorial on HF for this, am I right?

Good job, and Untouch has hit the nail on the head, on what to improve.

[gavgav3]

Nice one, you used the ninja bear tutorial on HF for this, am I right?

Good job, and Untouch has hit the nail on the head, on what to improve.

Of course I didn't use it...I like calvins work..but i wanted to make it mine. i would have felt i was recreating a work made by another into a lower quality... about the text..i just wanted some one there and i actually posted the render a second time after intergalaktic did and calvin is a freakin ninja..... but apparently people found one of our threads... unless it was posted even more or they googled for it...... ive actually used this render for a vertical peice too..

[Arеs]

@ v1 The signature is quite good, but it's empty. Try adding a border and some effects and maybe text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between three and four.
@ v2 The signature is good, it isn't empty. Again try adding a border and a better intelligent text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between nine and eight.

[gavgav3]

@ v1 The signature is quite good, but it's empty. Try adding a border and some effects and maybe text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between three and four.
@ v2 The signature is good, it isn't empty. Again try adding a border and a better intelligent text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between nine and eight.

I've had a border. The entire time. And what do you mean adding MORE effects? I think there is plenty... it might just be the lighting that makes you think there isnt as many effects as when I look at it..perspective difference probably.

V3