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Kuma - gavgav3 - 10-30-2010

[Image: kumaregsig.png]
CnC Please Big Grin

RE: Kuma - Eve - 10-30-2010

Nice depth, lighting, proportioning and border. The render can be moved slightly left to address the empty space there.

Effects are careful, but a little monochrome without colour highlights or text.

RE: Kuma - Magiic™ - 10-30-2010

The effects are too few for me, but you did well with pretty much everything else.

RE: Kuma - gavgav3 - 10-30-2010

V2
[Image: kumaregsigv2.png]

RE: Kuma - Untouch - 10-30-2010

@ v1 There was much too much space, the lighting was a bit overwhelming and the render looks a bit low quality.
If you used the same render everyone else did it should of been high quality.
You wayyy overblurred and messed it up. Sad

@ v2 bad text and positioning. Render is now better quality and you fixed the blur.
You have improved the lighting nicely although the signature porportion now looks weird. Tongue

RE: Kuma - Richie - 10-31-2010

Nice one, you used the ninja bear tutorial on HF for this, am I right?

Good job, and Untouch has hit the nail on the head, on what to improve.

RE: Kuma - gavgav3 - 10-31-2010

(10-31-2010, 02:12 AM)Richie Wrote: Nice one, you used the ninja bear tutorial on HF for this, am I right?

Good job, and Untouch has hit the nail on the head, on what to improve.
Of course I didn't use it...I like calvins work..but i wanted to make it mine. i would have felt i was recreating a work made by another into a lower quality... about the text..i just wanted some one there and i actually posted the render a second time after intergalaktic did and calvin is a freakin ninja..... but apparently people found one of our threads... unless it was posted even more or they googled for it...... ive actually used this render for a vertical peice too..

RE: Kuma - Arеs - 11-01-2010

@ v1 The signature is quite good, but it's empty. Try adding a border and some effects and maybe text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between three and four.
@ v2 The signature is good, it isn't empty. Again try adding a border and a better intelligent text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between nine and eight.

RE: Kuma - gavgav3 - 11-01-2010

(11-01-2010, 08:48 AM)Firas™ Wrote: @ v1 The signature is quite good, but it's empty. Try adding a border and some effects and maybe text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between three and four.
@ v2 The signature is good, it isn't empty. Again try adding a border and a better intelligent text.
If I rate it it's gonna be something between nine and eight.
I've had a border. The entire time. And what do you mean adding MORE effects? I think there is plenty... it might just be the lighting that makes you think there isnt as many effects as when I look at it..perspective difference probably.

V3
[Image: kumaregsigv3.png]