09-01-2010, 08:53 PM
(09-01-2010, 08:39 PM)Zurmi Wrote: No problem.
The reactions and comments will be a lot different when they hear it as opposed to read it.
I agree completely. I will record something tomorrow if I am not too busy.
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 I agree completely. I will record something tomorrow if I am not too busy. 
09-12-2010, 04:31 PM
I'm bumping this up because I would love to have some more feedback. Thanks!
09-12-2010, 09:36 PM
It's deep. It's intense. It's freaking great!
09-19-2010, 02:48 PM
(09-12-2010, 09:36 PM)Josheywhat Wrote: It's deep. It's intense. It's freaking great! Thanks! I totally forgot about this poem! 
09-21-2010, 03:10 PM
Great content! Really raw and powerful.
That fact that you didn't use any consistent structure really adds the emotion and anger of the piece. Really enjoyed reading =). 
09-24-2010, 03:27 PM
Very dark! Very brute! I loved every line of this!
Everything is always better in the end. If things aren't better, it isn't the end.
09-27-2010, 03:22 PM
(09-21-2010, 03:10 PM)Deja-Vu Wrote: Great content! Really raw and powerful. (09-24-2010, 03:27 PM)Akihiko Wrote: Very dark! Very brute! I loved every line of this! Thanks guys! I might post some more in the future! 
09-28-2010, 02:07 PM
I loved the poem. How much time did it take you to write it?
09-28-2010, 06:18 PM
(09-28-2010, 02:07 PM)Zeon Wrote: I loved the poem. How much time did it take you to write it? I actually didn't take too much time with this. It was a really abrupt idea, too. I decided that writing a poem would be fun, and I just began to write. I had no consensus on the topic or how it would turn out, but I enjoy how it seems to some "full circle" by the end. It probably took about 45 minutes w/ distractions, and 30 minutes of actual work. Thanks for asking! |
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