Love

[Daniel Faraday]

Love
Whatever you need,
Is what I will be,
Whatever you see,
Shall be part of me.

I will go to the end,
Of the earth and sea,
Wherever you need me,
Is where I will be.

They say love is blind,
But how can that be,
Even in my dreams,
It is you that I see.

-Road Kamelot

Thoughts? Corrections?
(Sorry if it's not that good. I was kind of rushing. =/ )

[sLeepyK0z]

That was pretty good I have to say, and huge connections from that. That meant a lot to and the deeper meaning I get from it is amazing. Nice job, felt the passion in it. I wouldn't have guessed you rushed this at all, nice job man.

[Sam]

That last stanza was beautiful... You're a true poet.

[Intro]

Woaw, That was warpingly good.

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Pretty deep, too.

[Daniel Faraday]

Thanks for the positive feedback and for reading.

[Renegader]

This is amazing.