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Love - Daniel Faraday - 08-23-2010
Love
Whatever you need,
Is what I will be,
Whatever you see,
Shall be part of me.
I will go to the end,
Of the earth and sea,
Wherever you need me,
Is where I will be.
They say love is blind,
But how can that be,
Even in my dreams,
It is you that I see.
-Road Kamelot
Thoughts? Corrections?
(Sorry if it's not that good. I was kind of rushing. =/ )
RE: Love - sLeepyK0z - 08-23-2010
That was pretty good I have to say, and huge connections from that. That meant a lot to and the deeper meaning I get from it is amazing. Nice job, felt the passion in it. I wouldn't have guessed you rushed this at all, nice job man.
RE: Love - Sam - 08-23-2010
That last stanza was beautiful... You're a true poet.
RE: Love - Intro - 08-23-2010
Woaw, That was warpingly good.
Pretty deep, too.
RE: Love - Daniel Faraday - 08-23-2010
Thanks for the positive feedback and for reading.
RE: Love - Renegader - 08-24-2010
This is amazing.