Words

[Daniel Faraday]

Words

The words that we hear,
Are forever sound,
Provoking our dreams,
Onward bound.

They float through the air,
The music of life,
Without them we'd stray,
Lost to our strife.

Marked by our hope,
Spread by our dreams,
Forever they travel,
Between you and me.

-Road Kamelot

Comments? Corrections?

[Shades]

I really liked it, alot in fact.

[Daniel Faraday]

Thanks for the positive feedback.

[Renegader]

Very nice. You're good at this.

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Road Kamelot rocks , i played them in rhythm on my piano and it feels so good , wonderful words

[Sam]

Ah this is another great poem. You've got some real talent.

I would rep you but I already have for another fabulous poem

[Daniel Faraday]

Thanks mate.
I'll try to right another tonight.

[Robie]

Its a good peom, I like it.