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Words - Daniel Faraday - 08-21-2010
Words
The words that we hear,
Are forever sound,
Provoking our dreams,
Onward bound.
They float through the air,
The music of life,
Without them we'd stray,
Lost to our strife.
Marked by our hope,
Spread by our dreams,
Forever they travel,
Between you and me.
-Road Kamelot
Comments? Corrections?
RE: Words - Shades - 08-21-2010
I really liked it, alot in fact.
RE: Words - Daniel Faraday - 08-21-2010
Thanks for the positive feedback.
RE: Words - Renegader - 08-21-2010
Very nice. You're good at this.
RE: Words - 【 ¶ÑÇƦ€Ƿ¦ßŁΞ 】 - 08-22-2010
Road Kamelot rocks , i played them in rhythm on my piano and it feels so good , wonderful words
RE: Words - Sam - 08-22-2010
Ah this is another great poem. You've got some real talent.
I would rep you but I already have for another fabulous poem
RE: Words - Daniel Faraday - 08-22-2010
Thanks mate.
I'll try to right another tonight.
RE: Words - Robie - 08-22-2010
Its a good peom, I like it.