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Regret, A poem.
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(07-13-2011, 09:28 PM)Annuit Coeptis Wrote: This is a four stanza poem that I just wrote in the last twenty minutes. It reflects my personal life and just about everyone else's too. (It is generic.) Perhaps it is cheesy, I don't know. I think a lot of poems are about the same things: love and regret. But whatever, here it is:

Regret

I wish things happened differently
I wish that things could change
I wish I could go back
And avert this whole estrange.

Life keeps moving forward
Despite my will to stop
Will I ever get her back?
My instincts tell me not.

Why did this all begin?
Why did I do those things?
My questions have no answers,
And yet the truth still stings.

All I have is hope
And the knowledge from before
With both of those to garner
I will not anguish anymore.

Let me know what you think!

Really good man! I used to 'write poetry' but at the time I was a sad emo kid, so mine weren't that good at all Tongue .
-DeathxXxAwaits
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Regret, A poem. - by Annuit Coeptis - 07-13-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by BlackChaos - 07-14-2011, 01:05 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Dotty - 07-14-2011, 01:38 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Mayhem - 07-15-2011, 04:08 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Napalmâ„¢ - 07-15-2011, 05:59 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Drift - 07-15-2011, 02:21 PM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Mr. Beaux - 07-15-2011, 04:55 PM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Inventor - 07-16-2011, 08:26 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Deceive - 07-16-2011, 09:15 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Sin. - 07-16-2011, 11:15 PM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Patrick - 07-20-2011, 07:08 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Chef - 07-20-2011, 08:29 PM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by Behind Enemy Lines - 08-11-2011, 12:52 AM
RE: Regret, A poem. - by DeathxXxAwaits - 08-12-2011, 06:58 PM

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