06-11-2011, 05:17 PM
Great poem. A bit difficult to follow at first, but perhaps thats just me. I got it after reading it the second time though.
Not all poems rhyme. What he wrote is a free verse poem.
(06-09-2011, 06:04 AM)Anon Wrote: Don't get me wrong champion this is very very good work here, but i thought poems rhyme i have read it in wrong i didn't find the rhymes. Then again i don't have a interest in poems as I'm a song writer.
All in All GOOD JOB!
Not all poems rhyme. What he wrote is a free verse poem.