06-09-2011, 06:04 AM
Don't get me wrong champion this is very very good work here, but i thought poems rhyme i have read it in wrong i didn't find the rhymes. Then again i don't have a interest in poems as I'm a song writer.
All in All GOOD JOB!
All in All GOOD JOB!
YEH... I'm a song writer/singer whats your problem.