Poem: How life started

[Death Trap™]

Damn I really enjoyed reading this.
This sure has potential, but are u sure the words and the meaning of it fit the concept?

Kept inside the wound till the birth date

shouldnt that be womb?

(if you meant it like that, i apologize, just thought it was a bit odd)

Sorry. I did misspell it. lol

I just wrote it on the spot. It couldve been better if I put more thoughts to it. I probably might revise it.