01-04-2011, 01:47 PM
Damn I really enjoyed reading this.
This sure has potential, but are u sure the words and the meaning of it fit the concept?
Kept inside the wound till the birth date
shouldnt that be womb?
(if you meant it like that, i apologize, just thought it was a bit odd)
This sure has potential, but are u sure the words and the meaning of it fit the concept?
Kept inside the wound till the birth date
shouldnt that be womb?
(if you meant it like that, i apologize, just thought it was a bit odd)