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Beautiful
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Quote:Your words are bittersweet
When I’m not sure if they’re only said to me.
But how could I tell?
This seems to be going so well,
and it’s frightening.

So where’s it gonna go?
Down the drain, or farther than we’ll ever know?
It’s all up to you,
because you’ve got much more to lose
and even more to show.(?)

Since trust is such an issue,
how could I still miss you?
And how could I sitill want this so bad?
This won’t even last long,
couldn’t possibly go strong,
but it’s still you that I gotta have.

My friend wrote this and I'd like to know your opinion and pass it onto her. Go ahead and criticize about it but it's not me your hurting or helping.
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Beautiful - by Epicly - 12-17-2010, 05:00 PM
RE: Beautiful - by N.O.R.E - 12-17-2010, 05:28 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Wasiqkhan - 12-17-2010, 09:57 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Beautiful - 12-17-2010, 10:07 PM
RE: Beautiful - by xerotic - 12-17-2010, 10:18 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Νinja - 12-22-2010, 02:38 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Time - 12-22-2010, 02:47 AM
RE: Beautiful - by xerotic - 12-22-2010, 02:48 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Epicly - 12-22-2010, 02:38 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Techno - 12-23-2010, 01:45 AM

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