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About my crush.
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11-27-2010, 07:47 PM
Pretty good.
Try to use the same amount of syllables on rhyming words. 'Everyday'(3) and 'Say'(1) doesn't sound good at all. Or at least only 1 syllable difference.
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About my crush. - by lunagron - 11-27-2010, 07:36 PM
RE: About my crush. - by Solidus - 11-27-2010, 07:47 PM
RE: About my crush. - by lunagron - 11-27-2010, 09:44 PM
RE: About my crush. - by Legit Kid ™ - 11-28-2010, 11:09 AM
RE: About my crush. - by Charmz - 11-28-2010, 03:40 PM
RE: About my crush. - by lunagron - 11-28-2010, 04:35 PM
RE: About my crush. - by N.O.R.E - 11-28-2010, 05:46 PM
RE: About my crush. - by lunagron - 11-28-2010, 05:50 PM

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