10-29-2010, 08:22 PM
I really like your writing style. I mean REALLY LIKE. I don't know what it is, but I am really drawn toward it. Regarding the plot; I was very interested at the beginning, but as it reached the end I wasn't really into what was going on. It's only the introductory chapter, so I might as well cut you some slack. I look forward to reading some of your future work!