Tears of Heaven[POEM]

[itylernallen]

Another video post I like the way you have the music to enhance the words, but I think it should be an instrumental kind of music, its a little distracting when your trying to read the words. and the text is a little hard to read as it conflicts with the background. Just constructive criticism.

Yeah it was a bad idea to put white on a light background, but oh well it happned. In my later videos I will make them better, this was just something I slapped together.