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Tears of Heaven[POEM] - itylernallen - 09-25-2010
This is a poem I wrote after I broke up with my ex, I made it into video format so tell me what you think.
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UUdc1NPvZJ8[/youtube]
RE: Tears of Heaven[POEM] - AceInfinity - 09-25-2010
Another video post
I like the way you have the music to enhance the words, but I think it should be an instrumental kind of music, its a little distracting when your trying to read the words. and the text is a little hard to read as it conflicts with the background. Just constructive criticism.
RE: Tears of Heaven[POEM] - itylernallen - 09-25-2010
(09-25-2010, 12:45 PM)Infinity Wrote: Another video post
Yeah it was a bad idea to put white on a light background, but oh well it happned. In my later videos I will make them better, this was just something I slapped together.
RE: Tears of Heaven[POEM] - AceInfinity - 09-25-2010
give you props for the creativity though, you don't see that kind of thing around here often so good job man
RE: Tears of Heaven[POEM] - itylernallen - 09-25-2010
(09-25-2010, 02:09 PM)Infinity Wrote: give you props for the creativity though, you don't see that kind of thing around here often so good job man
Thanks mate, I think that was my first video so my newer ones will be better. I made that almost a year ago in about a month.
RE: Tears of Heaven[POEM] - Ḱø♭ε Ḃґƴαηт - 10-06-2010
Wow, you should keep up the good work, I really enjoyed it. Make more videos.