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09-01-2010, 08:13 PM
(09-01-2010, 06:43 PM)Zurmi Wrote: Exactly! No rhyming scheme!

It gets really repetitive to me sometimes.

Great work, once again.

Agreed. Poems that follow the exact same rhyming pattern can sometimes be a little dull or predictable, yet sometimes can provide the authenticity needed to give the reader/listener a sense of security and comfort. I know that doesn't make much sense, but the point I am trying to get across is; Predictability is sometimes a good thing, pertaining to the comfort and stability it can provide.
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Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 06:17 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 06:38 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 06:40 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 06:43 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:13 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 08:16 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:24 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 08:27 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:38 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 08:39 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:53 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 09:00 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-12-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Josheywhat - 09-12-2010, 09:36 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-19-2010, 02:48 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Deja-Vu - 09-21-2010, 03:10 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Akihiko - 09-24-2010, 03:27 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-27-2010, 03:22 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zeon - 09-28-2010, 02:07 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-28-2010, 06:18 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by superjoe128 - 10-01-2010, 04:38 AM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 10-03-2010, 10:05 AM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by SpankDaHobo - 10-06-2010, 03:56 AM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 10-09-2010, 12:06 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 02-25-2011, 10:14 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Melted oreo - 03-02-2011, 04:38 PM

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