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09-01-2010, 06:40 PM
(09-01-2010, 06:38 PM)Zurmi Wrote: I liked it alot to be honest!

Well done!

I like the rhyming scheme.

Thanks! The rhyming scheme was that there was no rhyming scheme! Haha, I sometimes just ramble in my poetry and rhyme when I feel like it. I don't usually maintain solid patterns when it comes to rhyming.

I appreciate your feedback!
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Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 06:17 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 06:38 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 06:40 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 06:43 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:13 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 08:16 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:24 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 08:27 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:38 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 08:39 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010, 08:53 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zurmi - 09-01-2010, 09:00 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-12-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Josheywhat - 09-12-2010, 09:36 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-19-2010, 02:48 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Deja-Vu - 09-21-2010, 03:10 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Akihiko - 09-24-2010, 03:27 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-27-2010, 03:22 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Zeon - 09-28-2010, 02:07 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 09-28-2010, 06:18 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by superjoe128 - 10-01-2010, 04:38 AM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 10-03-2010, 10:05 AM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by SpankDaHobo - 10-06-2010, 03:56 AM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 10-09-2010, 12:06 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Virtual Reality - 02-25-2011, 10:14 PM
RE: Nothing I Could Do - by Melted oreo - 03-02-2011, 04:38 PM

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