08-18-2010, 06:28 AM
8/10. Overall I think it really has potential. Heres a few pros and cons..
Pros:
- Positioning of the render.
- Shatter effect fits well with the theme.
- Colour theme looks really professional.
- Blending is fairly good.
- Overall is a really interesting piece to look at.
Cons:
- Text should be removed. Either that or you should create 3D text which will match the whole image. (Maybe adding a shatter effect).
- Background is far to bright.
- Try and make the render jump out a bit more. The image seems a bit flat.
Good work though keep it up mate.
Pros:
- Positioning of the render.
- Shatter effect fits well with the theme.
- Colour theme looks really professional.
- Blending is fairly good.
- Overall is a really interesting piece to look at.
Cons:
- Text should be removed. Either that or you should create 3D text which will match the whole image. (Maybe adding a shatter effect).
- Background is far to bright.
- Try and make the render jump out a bit more. The image seems a bit flat.
Good work though keep it up mate.