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the chase - bkotz - 08-17-2010 my first lp in a while (2nd in all) watchu think? update: RE: the chase - Eve - 08-17-2010 The reflective splinters are great - they provide a real sense of movement. Render works well with the background. Too many light sources - light should be mostly on the right of the piece. Text position and font are perfect, though text size can be smaller. Good job overall! RE: the chase - Kanee - 08-17-2010 9/10 overall, the explosion effect, looks really good! I also like the ground, how it like splits up. RE: the chase - Nemmyy - 08-17-2010 I agree with Eve about the reflective splinters and the light source, although I don't really like the text, the font or the color. 8/10 RE: the chase - bkotz - 08-18-2010 i think i f'd up the colors on this one: RE: the chase - sLeepyK0z - 08-18-2010 Nice work man, looks really good and it's pretty unique as well. I'll give it a 9/10 as well. Keep it up man. Great picture, this could be used great as a signature if you decided to make it smaller. RE: the chase - Fragma - 08-18-2010 8/10. Overall I think it really has potential. Heres a few pros and cons.. Pros: - Positioning of the render. - Shatter effect fits well with the theme. - Colour theme looks really professional. - Blending is fairly good. - Overall is a really interesting piece to look at. Cons: - Text should be removed. Either that or you should create 3D text which will match the whole image. (Maybe adding a shatter effect). - Background is far to bright. - Try and make the render jump out a bit more. The image seems a bit flat. Good work though keep it up mate. RE: the chase - bkotz - 08-21-2010 updated: hopfully looks little better RE: the chase - Taniel - 08-21-2010 I love the last updated one, looks great. The second one doesn't look so well. First one is pretty good also. RE: the chase - Omniscient - 08-21-2010 I think you're doing a great job. So far everything you're doing is working well imho. I'm at a loss on how to improve it.