the chase

[bkotz]

my first lp in a while (2nd in all)





watchu think?

update:

[Eve]

The reflective splinters are great - they provide a real sense of movement. Render works well with the background. Too many light sources - light should be mostly on the right of the piece.

Text position and font are perfect, though text size can be smaller.

Good job overall!

[Kanee]

9/10 overall, the explosion effect, looks really good! I also like the ground, how it like splits up.

[Nemmyy]

I agree with Eve about the reflective splinters and the light source, although I don't really like the text, the font or the color.
8/10

[bkotz]

i think i f'd up the colors on this one:

[sLeepyK0z]

Nice work man, looks really good and it's pretty unique as well. I'll give it a 9/10 as well. Keep it up man. Great picture, this could be used great as a signature if you decided to make it smaller.

[Fragma]

8/10. Overall I think it really has potential. Heres a few pros and cons..

Pros:

- Positioning of the render.
- Shatter effect fits well with the theme.
- Colour theme looks really professional.
- Blending is fairly good.
- Overall is a really interesting piece to look at.

Cons:

- Text should be removed. Either that or you should create 3D text which will match the whole image. (Maybe adding a shatter effect).
- Background is far to bright.
- Try and make the render jump out a bit more. The image seems a bit flat.

Good work though keep it up mate.

[bkotz]

updated: hopfully looks little better

[Taniel]

I love the last updated one, looks great. The second one doesn't look so well. First one is pretty good also.

[Omniscient]

I think you're doing a great job. So far everything you're doing is working well imho. I'm at a loss on how to improve it.