Poem: How life started

[Death Trap™]

Life all started as soon as a baby is conceive
A fetus who is unable to see the world outside as we perceive
that a father and mother had came together to procreate
Kept inside the womb till the birth date

As the baby's heart pounds away in a confined space
In a dark place where it developed at its own pace
Being unaware of what is happening around
Its heartbeat pulsating throughout a mother's warm and comfort womb

9 months of torture a mother would endure
To bring something beautiful into this world
A magnificent gift; it has to be for sure
Eventually time drawn near as the couple hurled

A baby who is about to be introduced
A mother who gave all her boost
As everyone patiently waiting for the grand news
Time seems to be still as the baby pull throughs

It takes it first breath of life
The husband stood by his wife
It lets out its first cry
The couple had done it on their first try

[Raain]

Damn I really enjoyed reading this.
This sure has potential, but are u sure the words and the meaning of it fit the concept?

Kept inside the wound till the birth date

shouldnt that be womb?

(if you meant it like that, i apologize, just thought it was a bit odd)

[Death Trap™]

Damn I really enjoyed reading this.
This sure has potential, but are u sure the words and the meaning of it fit the concept?

Kept inside the wound till the birth date

shouldnt that be womb?

(if you meant it like that, i apologize, just thought it was a bit odd)

Sorry. I did misspell it. lol

I just wrote it on the spot. It couldve been better if I put more thoughts to it. I probably might revise it.