05-24-2011, 07:41 PM
It was a school project, basically you wrote poems throughout a period of 1 month and my english teacher helped us edit it.
I know it is not the best, but poetry does intrest me.
My teacher was well connected and is a decently known author.
Book Name: Raising Humanity
Writen by: High School students
Edited by: Michael E. Sweet
Featuring: - An introduction by Martin Sheen (Famous Actor, father of Charlie Sheen)
- An introduction by Marc Garneau (First Canadian astronaut in space)
My Poem:
Thanks guys, Don't be to critical please!
It was my 3rd poem. I was published in another book, I will post that poem later.
I know it is not the best, but poetry does intrest me.
My teacher was well connected and is a decently known author.
Book Name: Raising Humanity
Writen by: High School students
Edited by: Michael E. Sweet
Featuring: - An introduction by Martin Sheen (Famous Actor, father of Charlie Sheen)
- An introduction by Marc Garneau (First Canadian astronaut in space)
My Poem:
The Next Morning
Waking the next morning,
my eyes fare filled with confusion,
A sensation of fear
trembles down my body.
Mom tells me
my brother is suffering.
Last night is a blur,
says the pounding in my head.
Then it hits me,
I'd promise to only have one.
Promise broken.
Drunk behind the wheel
I lost control...
The sensation of fear vanishes,
it is replaced by regret.
Waking the next morning,
my eyes fare filled with confusion,
A sensation of fear
trembles down my body.
Mom tells me
my brother is suffering.
Last night is a blur,
says the pounding in my head.
Then it hits me,
I'd promise to only have one.
Promise broken.
Drunk behind the wheel
I lost control...
The sensation of fear vanishes,
it is replaced by regret.
Thanks guys, Don't be to critical please!
It was my 3rd poem. I was published in another book, I will post that poem later.