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RE: Regret, A poem. - Patrick - 07-20-2011
Not bad at all very short but straight to the point, Good Job.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Chef - 07-20-2011
The last 2 stanzas were the best.
This was a nice poem too.
RE: Regret, A poem. - Behind Enemy Lines - 08-11-2011
Sounds like from a song, eminemlike. Good job eitherway.
RE: Regret, A poem. - DeathxXxAwaits - 08-12-2011
(07-13-2011, 09:28 PM)Annuit Coeptis Wrote: This is a four stanza poem that I just wrote in the last twenty minutes. It reflects my personal life and just about everyone else's too. (It is generic.) Perhaps it is cheesy, I don't know. I think a lot of poems are about the same things: love and regret. But whatever, here it is:
Regret
I wish things happened differently
I wish that things could change
I wish I could go back
And avert this whole estrange.
Life keeps moving forward
Despite my will to stop
Will I ever get her back?
My instincts tell me not.
Why did this all begin?
Why did I do those things?
My questions have no answers,
And yet the truth still stings.
All I have is hope
And the knowledge from before
With both of those to garner
I will not anguish anymore.
Let me know what you think!
Really good man! I used to 'write poetry' but at the time I was a sad emo kid, so mine weren't that good at all
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