Laugh - Random Freestyle

[Peter L]

Video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZA8PF12oAXk

Tell me how the flow sounded, how it went with the beat, how to sound better, how to use syllables better, how to control breathing, how to make my voice more legible, and also how it generally sounded.

Don't tell me I sounded low or the lyrics don't "mean" anything. I also know on some lines I didn't sound very articulate(like at 20. Lack of breath I guess). And don't tell me I'm being cocky..it is just words. When I say something I mean, I'll let everyone know.

[!LoL]

Tell me how the flow sounded, how it went with the beat, how to sound better, how to use syllables better, how to control breathing, how to make my voice more legible, and also how it generally sounded.

[Peter L]

Thanks for the input, bots.

[Impulses SF]

It was alright I guess.. I give you props for trying atleast.
At some point the quality was so terrible I could not understand what you were saying!

[Peter L]

The quality was terrible or you just couldn't understand me?

[F.ate]

The quality is bad and you need to work on your flow so it's not so plain. It sounded like you stuttered in parts and you need to work on not sounding so 'stiff.' Not bad though, keep at it.

[Richie]

You stuttered at some parts, where you're not like pacing yourself.

Pretty good attempt tho, not my kind of music.

[χтяємє™]

I felt the quality should be improved.

[BlackChaos]

Alright. Here's the actual review you probably hoped for:

How the flow sounded: The flow was very good. I was bobbing my head along with the track

How it went with the beat: It went with the beat quite well. Your words in proper synchronization with the music.

How to sound better: I Try using a better microphone if you have one. If not, then try opening your mouth a bit. You seem to be mumbling at times. @0:12 @0:42
I guess most of them are due to lack of breathing control.

How to use syllables better: If you vary up your speed along with the lines, you'll do great with syllables. Just try not to mix too many of them up one line if you're unable to handle it.

How to control breathing:
http://www.ehow.com/way_5497385_breathin...ppers.html

How to make my voice more legible:
Eat some cheerios, limber up a bit and don't mumble. Try to open your moutha s much as you can to get the sound out. I know it sounds weird, but it works. After a while, you'll get used to it.

How it generally sounded: It was good. Definitely good. I would love to hear more
PM me whenever you have more tracks.

[Richie]

Alright. Here's the actual review you probably hoped for:

How the flow sounded: The flow was very good. I was bobbing my head along with the track

How it went with the beat: It went with the beat quite well. Your words in proper synchronization with the music.

How to sound better: I Try using a better microphone if you have one. If not, then try opening your mouth a bit. You seem to be mumbling at times. @0:12 @0:42
I guess most of them are due to lack of breathing control.

How to use syllables better: If you vary up your speed along with the lines, you'll do great with syllables. Just try not to mix too many of them up one line if you're unable to handle it.

How to control breathing:
http://www.ehow.com/way_5497385_breathin...ppers.html

How to make my voice more legible:
Eat some cheerios, limber up a bit and don't mumble. Try to open your moutha s much as you can to get the sound out. I know it sounds weird, but it works. After a while, you'll get used to it.

How it generally sounded: It was good. Definitely good. I would love to hear more
PM me whenever you have more tracks.

Well, you've made all of our posts/reviews look pretty crappy heh.

Laugh, what kinda mic do you have?