[Poem] Mourning Glory

[Metapod]

Here's a short poem I just made. Feedback?

Valiantly he stood alone,
A symbol among men.
Bodies all around,
His sword gleaming crimson.
Flag bestowed upon his back,
He plants it into the Earth.
Now, victorious and worn,
He casts his sword aside.
He vows never to fight,
For he mourns what he sees.
-Ronald Munday

[BlackChaos]

Excellent phrasing and appropriate use of appropriate words =)
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your poems here.

[Invincible]

Nice work mate, great use of words.

[Do0ks]

Dude, Not bad at all. I like it. It tells a story.

[Metapod]

Haha thanks guys

I made this last night, couldn't sleep. I had a weird image in my head of a knight on a hill. It seemed so vidid so I made a poem out of it XD

Thanks for all the nice words

[rootkit]

This sounds like a power metal song to me
I like it!

[Metapod]

I updated the thread and named my poem

[BlackChaos]

I updated the thread and named my poem

Hehe. I though I was the only one who uses that format of titles.

[Metapod]

Hehe. I though I was the only one who uses that format of titles.

Yeah I noticed that and I liked so I started using it

[BlackChaos]

Yeah I noticed that and I liked so I started using it

Well, I'm pleased someone noticed
Glad you liked it. If you ever need inspiration, PM me or check out my threads