It has been about 2 months since i wrote a song so i decided i better start writing again so here we go this is not a final version it will be edited. remeber i play metal so use that as a base.
Fire raining from the sky
my mind dissolving (sp?)
Whats going on?
whats happening?
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
You idiots!
You did this!
Its your fault!
Now you will be punished!
Fire raining from the sky
My mind dissolving
Whats going on
whats happening
You Fools!
What you done?
You will be punished
The ground gissolving beneath you
Fall to your death!
This is a symbol
this is your punishment
Fall into the flames
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
The water steaming
Heating up
Burning for eternity
This is your punishment
You idiots!
You did this!
What now?
Whatr you gonna do?
Your death awaits you !
Tell me what you think constructive critsism (sp?) welcome but dont just tell me its bad give me a reason.
Punishment
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!Fire raining from the sky
my mind dissolving (sp?)
Whats going on?
whats happening?
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
You idiots!
You did this!
Its your fault!
Now you will be punished!
Fire raining from the sky
My mind dissolving
Whats going on
whats happening
You Fools!
What you done?
You will be punished
The ground gissolving beneath you
Fall to your death!
This is a symbol
this is your punishment
Fall into the flames
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
The water steaming
Heating up
Burning for eternity
This is your punishment
You idiots!
You did this!
What now?
Whatr you gonna do?
Your death awaits you !
Tell me what you think constructive critsism (sp?) welcome but dont just tell me its bad give me a reason.