[Anime] Bright Light

[Untouch]

Entered an anime battle in the graphic master section on HF and won with this entry.



Comments are welcome.

[Sam]

One word... Love. 10/10

I don't even like anime but this owns.

[Bok1ca]

Uh nice one mate. If you have some time make me signature Your choise for render/text etc etc.

[SpankDaHobo]

Wow, this is a masterpiece man! You should forget Bokica and just make one for me first

[bkotz]

ok time 4 some rea cnc:

the render is to sharp on the face
lighting on the render is off
theres no shadows

other then taht good job

[Oliver]

I love it. Your best work yet.

Text is bad though. :3

[Untouch]

I did sharpen her face but I thought it suited. Maybe I should lower the opacity of the sharpen layer.
I actually think the lighting and shadows is fine on this because the light source is infront of the render so there wont be any shadows except for under the finger / arm which if you looks under her left hand fingers there is.

As for the text I coudn't do anything to make it suit for this piece.

Edit: thanks for the comments and here is the original render:

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[Devil TraZ]

The text is very bad, it is too messy and you should stick to at most 3 different fonts at one time.
Other than that everything is top notch, 8/10

[Fragma]

Text is nice. (Although it could be positioned better).
Face looks strange. (Probably like bkotz said, its to sharp).
Needs more shadows around her face. (Under her hair, below her chin etc..)
Also I'm not really a fan of the dimensions you've used. (But thats just down to personal taste).

Good job anyway I'd probably rate it 8/10.

[Untouch]

It was originally 400 x 200 until I cut a part of.