Over-night war [POEM]

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Over-night war
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The stars are gleaming,
babies are dreaming,
the moon is glistening,
and owl's are listening.

fox's are prowling,
badgers are growling,
the all-nighters frowning,
as their best mates are clowning.

from the darkness they pour and pour,
enemy bombers more and more,
drifting in with racks and racks,
of bombs and bombs that hold the pack.

from the sky they do thus fall,
falling and falling, once and for all.
as a God frowns down on the act taking place,
another God far away, has a smile on their face.

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[Robie]

I like it, How long did it take you to make?

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A little bit, 25 minutes or so?

[sLeepyK0z]

Jeez man this was pretty good for only 25mins. I know I couldn't create something like this in 25mins. I liked it a lot, made sense and was really smooth isn't hard to understand. 10/10 my friend, keep it up.

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Thanks, add my hf: N U M B

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RaverWill :- its awesome , you are good at this dude ...

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Thanks alot, everyone I'll be making more soon.

[xTiNgUiSh]

That seems like a pro wrote that. Nice job. I know who to ask to do my english homework lol

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Lol. I might consider it too :L

[Hustler]

That was great, keep up the great work