Yin's Poetry - Hatrid Ex

[Yin]

I wrote this one for iBruteforce, tell me how you like it.

Aversion Matron


The one I used to call my amour
Left me with much anguish.
She said she had a fond cherish,
Then what was the reason to vanish?

I thought I admired her,
Now I despise her.
She's not that elegant,
Could find better in the terrace.

We once had something memorable,
At this time I can't connote my despair,
I wish I could smell that luscious hair.
It's true, I do despise her
But she was altered.

She was deferential, never pyschotic,
I called her bionic.
I wish I had her again,
Even though this is where it cessates.

[hockeynut35]

Personally I like it.

IBruteforce might slap you though.....

[Yin]

Nah, he liked it.

[C00k13]

I like it

[TØχiςated™]

Personally the poetry to me. It is very good and nicely written.

[Christopher]

Great. 9/10

[Industrialized™]

That is really nice Yin. I would like to see a lot more of your poems posted here

[Roro]

That's actually really good, I must say!
Write me one of these?

[Reality]

Nice

why's it seem like iBF is a girl

[MySocksAreWet]

I like it, except for the bionic part, I didn't really understand it.