What do you think of my rap

[Bjfox]

Spoken: At this poiny in my life, my ex was hurting me. Seeing a person you have feeling's for everyday it kills you. I was being brought back into the party atmosphere I feared. Maybe a drunk was the only option for me.


Rap:

I feel like my future has been take from me. Drinking to forget has to be my legacy. Problem's arising, people surprising me. I could end my life right now, but what wouwld that allow. An endless soul put to rest looking for death. Trying to take away my problems with my ex. What's next? My life is hell, hell is my life$ getting rid of problems popping shots in the middile of the night. This is me locked in chains. Went from the top of the world to hustling. No one to blame. Dope doesn't affect me so I'm puffing cigaretts. Can't you see? My world has been torn and so has my dream

[Niko Bellic]

The ending isn't that great.

[Bjfox]

thanks for finally posting... jeez 30 views 0 posts lil sad

[ktmrider530]

Honestly, i think it can use a little work tords the middle and end. But i like the concept.

[Mozz]

You should of said this to her! haha


Yo, international looking class
Turn around let me check out your Ass
oh my god let me take a look
Holy crap she's Fit As Fcuk
Body flexing
She makes my head Spin
Oh my gosh she's got me gasping
I can tell by the way shes acting
she got a boyfriend my mates just cracked him

Now! This girl that i just pulled
i opened up her legs to see the Axe wound
Her fanny was foaming
But she was moaning
I must admit she got a damn good boaning
A week later she rings me up
shes like moz i wanna good fcuk
i said listen to me bitch
i aint got time
So Here Comes Me with The Wickedest Ryme!!!!!

[Bjfox]

Haha man mozz props to you that was some sick stuff

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Thanks omni just saw your post... Ill kep working on it

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Thanks omni just saw your post... Ill kep working on it

[ktmrider530]

Haha man mozz props to you that was some sick stuff

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Thanks omni just saw your post... Ill kep working on it

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Thanks omni just saw your post... Ill kep working on it

Not omni broha.

[Treblez]

LOL why would you keep fooling people that you're Omni ? Thats not cool.

[Bjfox]

I sware when i saw the post it said omni on it

[ktmrider530]

LOL why would you keep fooling people that you're Omni ? Thats not cool.

Fooling people? By clearly stating that i'm not omni? That made sense.