My first Cinema 4D

[Runda20]

This is the first time in Cinema 4D after looking at someone making a shape explode I thought.. why not my name (don't yell/hurt/kill me D

http://zhost.tk/u/oy/runda20explosion.jpg

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[Uzi]

It looks decent but it's a low quality image, and looks a little distorted with the noise.
Anyway, I like the background - the text is fairly simple and it's easy enough to create red text using Cinema 4D.
I've seen something similar to this but only it was a .gif and the glass shattered whilst the text floated around.
You should try something like that but for a beginner I think you've done an alright job with it, well done.

[Secure.]

It looks as stated above, Low Quality.
if you could arange that it would look perfect.

[kebralt]

The font looks pretty bland. Maybe spice it up a bit. Give it some flare.