How Does This Logo Look?

[Peter L]

*New Logo:*
By itself:


Thoughts? I'm new to Photoshop and it is very basic so let me know how it looks.

[Fragma]

Pretty bad to be honest. Too much text, not a great font, and the colours are very dull.
Sorry.

[Peter L]

No need to be sorry. Btw your sig image is broken.

[Tobe]

I think you should read this tutorial to get some inspiration.
http://www.garysimon.net/logotutorial/

[Peter L]

That is a badass tutorial..I'm going to re-do the logo following it today. Thank you.

[Uzi]

It looks pretty good for a beginner, maybe not against the background but it's alright.
You have potential though, considering you're a beginner then there's room for you to improve over time.
Start off by downloading some renders, brushes etc and create some signatures/tags.
Also show us the upcoming logos you create, thanks and lot and best of luck.

[Peter L]

How does this one look?

[Fragma]

Far far better! Although the text on the right doesn't do it any good.
The logo looks pretty nice though!

[Peter L]

Any suggestions on the text? I can't seem to get it right >_<

[Represent]

I like the logo, but the text ruins it. Too narrow & skinny for me. I suggest 'Bebas'. It'd go pretty good with the logo. Good luck.